honestly, not bad homemade bread. Not great; I think the oven needed to be preheated more, and it's denser and not as airy as it should be (more yeast? leave it for 10 hours rather than 8?) but all in all not bad.
@sil When I first started making bread I'd get variable results even from following the same recipe. In the end, rather than any specific tweak to my method, the obvious-in-hindsight thing that worked for me was: practice.
@mavit yeah, that feels like the approach! getting something edible first time out is perfectly good enough for now I reckon